Friday, 24 February 2012

Final Draft- First 2 Minutes

Daryl Black, a typical primary school teacher comes home from work and goes into his garage. He takes a key stuck to the side of the fridge, unlocks the file and pulls out a journal and flicks through the pages. He turns to a page with a young girl: Evie. Her name was in penned into the
book with blood red ink at the top of the page. He pulls out a loose picture of Evie and pins it to the wall next to a clock, and a picture of a young woman, his Goddaughter, Willow. He pins the picture of Evie over another, unknown girl.

At 12 O'clock Daryl goes towards a dark ally to follow Willow who is by herself and is unaware that Daryl is following her, she is listening to some music. Evie walks out into the ally and Daryl quickly strangles and kills her. Daryl hides the wire he used to strangle Evie, as he attempts to move the body, Willow turns around because she realises that she has dropped her keys and see's the murdered Evie on the floor and a man who's face she did not recognise. Daryl picks up the body and staggers away whilst Willow stands in shock.

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